A fall from grace.

A fall from grace.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

A fall from grace.
Madam,
was not the sparkle
in your gargle
over spilt wine;
the downward slope laughing
til you hit the floor.
Madam! Your knickers are showing!

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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The last line...hahahaha, this is so hilarious Andrew...I always find it funny when grown up people fall down, even myself when i fall i will laugh at myself but then it depends on the fall

Posted 7 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

7 Years Ago

lol Thank you Cassie originally the last line was Madam, you have no knickers on! but I thought that.. read more
Good job on this. Love the humor.
A serious situation, seems like she took a couple falls there.

Posted 7 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

7 Years Ago

Thank you Black Cat fever:):)
Black Cat Fever

7 Years Ago

You are very welcome. :)

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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