SOS Love overboard!

SOS. Love overboard!

On the curve

of her smile

lips embraced,

tongues searching,

fireworks drumming

on hormones released,

a need to fulfill,

on a promise.

The sum of us.

 SOS Love overboard.

Reviews

[Cobblestone Traveler]

So sweet and magical. I see a young couple on a cool night, on a yacht, kissing under the celebratory fireworks of some holiday. The electricity of the festivities filling the air and the senses. Lovely write.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you cobblestone for your words.

[Paul Bell]

Only seems like last week i heard the fireworks.
Well actually, it was on the fifth, but that was different fireworks.

[andrew mitchell]

haha thanks paul, this poem lacks fireworks too on rereading.

[Valentine]

Wanted to chuckle at this one, my niece is in her first relationship, his first also and watching them seems like this write. Hope their innocence lasts. Valentine

[andrew mitchell]

me too, i hope its a fairytale, the best feeling that first relationship, the unknown of it all