If only!

If only!

After their first date,

now residing in heaven.

She said. " You are too intense, and highly strung!"

He said. "If  only you pulled my cord

              instead of  jumping to conclusions."

Their first and last parachute jump!

Reviews

[Mary Helda]

Oh dear, haha..you never cease to amaze me my friend,such wit,humour,character and beauty in a few simple lines..Just wonderful

[andrew mitchell]

Hi Mary, nice to hear from you and thank you, taking the time to visit my page. I hope you are well and I shall dissect your writes soon.

[Mary Helda]

Hello Andrew, i am well. Hope you are fine too, I have been offline for a long time, decided to come back, I missed this place, will be reading more of your works

[andrew mitchell]

i will read yours too for entertainment only!!!!!!

[Mary Helda]

Hahaha, entertainment only!, Sounds good to me. Well,i will be reading yours for pleasure only

[ms. barrie]

oh my!!! LOL...how you incorporate your clever wit with profoundness,
truly amazes me, Andrew! your writes somewhat reminds me of
Shel Silverstein :)) - X

[andrew mitchell]

In my ignorance I will have to look up this writer! Yes the differences of the sexes trying to gel in dating but the awkwardness to impress can be interpreted in many ways, astray! Thank you ms barrie xo.

[ms. barrie]

what;s dating? haha...certainly can :)) you're welcome xox

[ms. barrie]

https://www.goodreads.com/author/quotes/435477.Shel_Silverstein

[andrew mitchell]

I was talking about the characters in my write having a interest but words get mislead leading to their ..... ending lol:):)

[ms. barrie]

lol...my brain is apparently on vacation now, sorry for the misunderstanding...
brilliant write, either way...trying to catch all your ink drops :)) xo

[andrew mitchell]

You are fine ms barrie I so appreciate your visits and reviews.:)

[ms. barrie]

awh, nice to know someone does on here -- xox -- pixie dust dreams!