A grain of time.

A grain of time.

Some thought sand

was the mask

that covered

unearthed treasures.

But sand was just

a fragment of time

passing.

Reviews

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Very philosophical indeed!

You have written a very thought provoking piece in the space of seven short lines, no easy task!

Certainly one to think deeply about. Very impressive thoughts, Andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Doodley for such a lovely review and comments. I shall return the love soon so to speak..

[Beccy]

Interesting thought that compared to eternity, a grain of sand will exist for less time than a single blink of the creator's eye; which of course, speaks volumes for our humble three score year and ten.

This is as all encompassing in its seeming simplicity as the vastness of the Sahara.

Different to your usual writing and quite thought provoking.

Beccy.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your lovely review Beccy.

[Sami Khalil]

I love this. One of your best. I can't get enough of your writings. ...:::))))

[andrew mitchell]

Haha in your court I am your humble jester.:-), thank you Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

I should pay you handsomely then for a great talent...lol
You are welcome. ....:::))))