Doing the cranial waltz.

Doing the cranial waltz.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Doing the cranial waltz.

Closing eyes,astral planes;
a night's garden
traveling the decibels, sound.

Twas a space oddity
climbing the stairway to heaven,
castles in the air
on strawberry fields forever.

I didn't take the walk
on the wild side but
all along the watchtower
I follow you,
you follow me.

I hear you hum
Hey Joe
Doing the
Cranial waltz.

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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The dance
Waltz is not easy by the way
There is alot of "Ouch my foot" moments
i tried it

Witty write :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

thank you Serendipity and you are so right on the waltz lol
Nisreen

8 Years Ago

True test of love
if you can handle him stepping on your toes lol
then it must be real.. read more
andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

yes i have found i am the culprit in these manoeveres or else she has big feet lol.
...if I follow you will you follow me? ; )

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

always kelly
As everyone so far has stated - excellent references!
This was a very fun, very neat piece. Enjoyable as always.

Phoenix

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

For a craftsman as you Phoenix you are too kind. thank you.
PhoenixDown

8 Years Ago

If I was female Andrew, I'd have put a ring on you day 1. Bahaha thanks bud.
andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

lol.......................
Super! Love all the song references some of them my favourites. Great piece Andrew. R xo

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you Ray for your lovely comments and for taking the time to comment.:) I shall return the Love.. read more
great song references...i love that don maclean song...my favorite of his..."tell her that i'm tired of castles in the air"

and for the dance...yes, "there must be some kind of way outta here"

but i'll be going with that gun in my hand.

do dodo dododododododododo

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your words jacob and stopping by.

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Added on October 21, 2016
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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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