The financial strangler.
A Poem by
andrew mitchell
The financial strangler.
Of the necklace given,
mesmerising her thoughts
placed upon her neck
embracing excitedly,
together beauty shining;
the necklace in turn
strangled the buyer.
© 2016 andrew mitchell
Reviews
This made me chuckle the comment below was exactly what I was thinking. Another great write. R xo
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you Rach for reading and the smile too!:)
If ever a man says to me, 'it's the thought that counts,' it's a sure bet he's done something on the cheap.
Having said that, I'd much rather have a thoughtfully picked daisy than two dozen hastily bought roses. :))
Beccy.
Posted 8 Years Ago
If ever a man says to me, 'it's the thought that counts,' it's a sure bet he's done something on the cheap.
Having said that, I'd much rather have a thoughtfully picked daisy than two dozen hastily bought roses. :))
Beccy.
8 Years Ago
lol thank you beccy for dropping by. i shall return the love for its the thoughts that count;)
oh my, yes, we will go broke trying to please our mates and hold onto their love...
if only love was deemed priceless as in "can't put a price on it and can't put it around your neck, just your heart"
well done.
Posted 8 Years Ago
oh my, yes, we will go broke trying to please our mates and hold onto their love...
if only love was deemed priceless as in "can't put a price on it and can't put it around your neck, just your heart"
well done.
8 Years Ago
haha exactly thank you for your words
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Added on October 16, 2016
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