The unzip.

The unzip.

On unzipping

your thoughts

I undressed,

naked your emotions 

falling to the floor

in waiting, longing,

you outstretched

on lust combined;

the union  fused

from fireworks consented.

Reviews

[aLittlePain]

Soothing and terribly romantic. Very nice. R x

[andrew mitchell]

thank you alittlepain

[V]

Such a lovely one on mutual feelings, pleasure. Smooth and nice to read.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you for your lovely visit vanessa

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Romantic and dare i say it, a little raunchy!

A lovely flow of words; and a very good analogy in that title; unzipping the layers to see the person within, just like the unzipping of a dress.

A very different poem from what i usually read from you. You are maturing still! Haha. A very seductive write.

[andrew mitchell]

haha too kind doodley, far from mature in thought lol but thank you.

[Pryde Foltz]

Wow ... amazing, Andrew. Great work:)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Pryde:)

[Patricia Wedel]

Consenting fireworks... in colors of autumn...
falling in lustful piles of emotions...
unzipping the warmth of passion... truly
breath-taking poetry... Pat

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Pat for your kind words.:)

[Patricia Wedel]

You are welcome🍁🎨🍁... Pat