The connection.

The connection.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

The connection.
Slipping on her ring,
she romanced the stone,
I nursed my wallet.
In the case of
being now equal,
but opposites attract.

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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Fantastic piece and cleverly done. A fine comparison between the materialistic and the generous. Opposites attract but at what cost? Or maybe they're one but on a different end of the spectrum.

A short one with a lot to chew on. Wonderfully penned. Will check more of your work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Yes alice how the lines of equality bend one way or another reaching that happy equilibrium, we hope.. read more
Ah, but there's a fine line indeed especially when the focus is on a chunk of rock...is that a balance to appreciate, I wonder. Made me think :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

A fine line indeed Poppy . thank you for your words and insights.
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Very clever, hey, girls love those shiny rocks. :) Opposites attract, but they hardly ever last imho.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

how true Paloma and thank you for your visit and comments.:)

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