She had her own Pearl harbour.

She had her own Pearl Harbour.

True love lies outside

her harbour

waiting for the kamikaze

attacks to subside.

But having other ideas

the freedom to move

she wasn't ready.

Always under friendly fire

feeding insatiable lust;

true love ran aground

in the end, wasted.

Reviews

[1VJ]

Is this like all's fair in love and war? The metaphor is potent, the kamikaze is relatable. :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Paloma for your words and dropping by.

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest tone and story told in the poetry.
"Always under friendly fire
feeding insatiable lust;
true love ran aground
in the end, wasted."
I liked the above lines. Real life and true. Thank you Andrew for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you John for your lovely review.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.

[Adam Adams]

the hunger of lust must be fed well unless the body's not fully drained. and the beauty of one's is almost stuck in such enigmatic pilgrims of love & lust... in a juxtaposition to meet light or peace, somehow. quite deep. and very vivid. nice imagery here.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Adams for your words and the time to visit,much appreciated.