Externally yours.

Externally yours.

Having no heart,

externally yours,

waiting for the end;

money ticks on

pleasures spent.

" Keep the change."

Life is cheap,

the door now closed,

red light on,

she waits to be....

                          exposed.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words leading to strong ending. I like the use of the red light and nothing to hide no-more. Thank you Andrew for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your words John

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

after awhile we give up on the heart part...and just opt for the pleasure part.

like how going shopping can ease the pain of life.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you J for your words. It's a sad world where life is cheap.