In search of himself.

dangling thoughts!

In search of himself.

When the man set out

to find himself;

the mission, his goal on;

" Who am I?" 

The world was round

but the paper was not,

he went too far

crossing the line;

lost.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what he wrote was not what he became...

couldn't stay within his own lines...

never knew who he was after he became who he was.

[andrew mitchell]

Exactly Jacob thank you for your words.

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand the below lines.
"he went too far
crossing the line;
lost."
Easy to forget old dreams and places. Thank you Andrew for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you John for your kind words I shall visit your site soon my friend. I tried to cash in on the theory that the world was flat as they thought in those days and his life on paper written tipped over the page lost. lol

[Coyote Poetry]

You did very well and you are welcome.