Leave a message!

Leave a message!

The phone to her

       heart

 always engaged;

 the love line busy.

  Her message short;

" Leave a message after the beat!"

" I'll get back to you."

 She never did.

Reviews

[Valentine]

Fantastic write, had to chuckle. Valentine

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Kathie

[Einstein Noodle]

sometimes we just plain strike out ...tickled by the word play sir! :(
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Always pleased to have you passing through E, thank you.

[ms. barrie]

very evocative, and slightly biting, of one's love/emotions being played with.
thank you for sharing - X - barrie

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Ms.barrie for gracing my page:)

[emily.c.]

This is really simple but sharp. Perfect way to explain that feeling when somebody saves you for later.