The Attic.

                          The Attic.

                          The Attic

                          contained

                             all my

                            thoughts

                               but

                             no-one

                               had

                               the

                 

                               KEY.

Reviews

[wordman]

well it`s pretty bad when you can`t remember your memories! we call that old timers ..

[andrew mitchell]

Its about having a closed mind! No one had the key to open it.Thank you wordman.

[wordman]

how did i miss that !

[Pryde Foltz]

This poem delivered twice ... the first effect was a little chuckle ... sort of when you have put your glasses in the fridge or something and of course the winsome of memory lost for good. Great write, Andrew:)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Pryde, intentionally it was a metaphor for my mind lol. but I was too vague.

[ms. barrie]

oh i adore this! love the mischeivous, yet poignant ink...
i detest attics...my sister use to scare me with tales of
the devil living up in our attic (when we lived at my father's house)...rather convincingly!
though they do intrigue me though...thanks for letting me walk down memory lane...
and for sharing -- X - barrie

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Ms barrie, right from the attic of my mind:):)

[ms. barrie]

lol Andrew, my mind be fried...was relentlessly matching up the time to words on latest piece...since three today. and you're most welcome..."toys in the attic" :) - X - b.

[ms. barrie]

edit: matching up music to words..etc. etc. ^_*

[andrew mitchell]

i loved that nin music track as well as your midsomer piece ;) You need a coffee!

[ms. barrie]

oh i pretty revised quite a bit and slapped on a new song that fits better. and i like better, i love this musician myuuji...he just amazes...thank you dear :))

[andrew mitchell]

you are welcome dear poet

[ms. barrie]

oml...again edit: "revised quite a few bits..." --
now the high is gone *sad face*...well good time for some dark chocolate :)

[ms. barrie]

p.s. seems like you're the only one interested in visiting my thoughts lol

[andrew mitchell]

haha there's not many of us left in our reviewing world of friends as the new wave has entered wc.lol

[ms. barrie]

"somethings never change, it's just the way it is" -- forgot who the artist is,wow...
yep, which is why i will be disabling reviews...soon, as of now: i'm sick of having to constantly fix wonky font from copying pieces to WC...when you need to edit...it annoys!!

[ms. barrie]

will also become much more active on another undisclosed writing site i belong to, positive atmosphere and is strictly monitored.

[andrew mitchell]

you'll have to tell me! not run by kevin???

[ms. barrie]

lol Kevin? site is run by a lady lol
thank you again for your feedback on
revenant 💕 ~ barrie

[andrew mitchell]

I know a site run by kevin

[ms. barrie]

Right on! (: