Reading minds

Reading minds

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Reading minds.
Only when her pupils were dilated
could I dive in 
reading her thoughts.
In love, naked she knew
exactly where I stood
in mind over matters.
Yes! On my thoughts
she read my crystal ball;
Seeing my past and now..
my future she recited words
to which now I have to live up too.

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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1VJ
Funny and true, we spend the rest of our lives living up those initial expectations when we were on our best behavior!

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Is in it Just That lol.Thank you for reading.:)
oh this is romantic..love swimming in those dilated pupils...

but yes, risky...if she reads my thoughts and knows how i feel---my future is no longer in my hands, but in her eyes.

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Yes jacob the perils of first stage love, drowning lol until you reach the shore, the bubbles burst .. read more

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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