Twinkling.

Twinkling.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Twinkling.
Pushing the sky
away deep blue;
I was left black
until the applause
on the backing
left the moon shining
stars adoring, 
on twinklings absorbed.

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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dear Andrew... the other side of the moon
must be a heavenly dark blue sky where
stars twinkle endlessly... very romantic and
intoxicating... truly, Pat

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Pat.
Patricia Wedel

8 Years Ago

You are welcome ...truly, Pat
The heavens came alive with your words ... how bout that:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

I'll take that Pryde lol
So much imagery in my mind with these words,
I really enjoyed this piece,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you Jamestown
Nothing like a sky full of stars and not storm clouds. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


i wonder what those stars are thinking as they are looking down on the stars here on earth...

and are they applauding for us?

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on September 8, 2016
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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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