Twinkling.
A Poem by
andrew mitchell
Twinkling.
Pushing the sky
away deep blue;
I was left black
until the applause
on the backing
left the moon shining
stars adoring,
on twinklings absorbed.
© 2016 andrew mitchell
Reviews
dear Andrew... the other side of the moon
must be a heavenly dark blue sky where
stars twinkle endlessly... very romantic and
intoxicating... truly, Pat
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind words Pat.
8 Years Ago
You are welcome ...truly, Pat
The heavens came alive with your words ... how bout that:)
Posted 8 Years Ago
The heavens came alive with your words ... how bout that:)
8 Years Ago
I'll take that Pryde lol
So much imagery in my mind with these words,
I really enjoyed this piece,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
Posted 8 Years Ago
So much imagery in my mind with these words,
I really enjoyed this piece,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
8 Years Ago
Thank you Jamestown
Nothing like a sky full of stars and not storm clouds. Valentine
Posted 8 Years Ago
Nothing like a sky full of stars and not storm clouds. Valentine
i wonder what those stars are thinking as they are looking down on the stars here on earth...
and are they applauding for us?
Posted 8 Years Ago
i wonder what those stars are thinking as they are looking down on the stars here on earth...
and are they applauding for us?
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Added on September 8, 2016
Last Updated on September 8, 2016
Author
andrew mitchell adelaide, Australia
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