Quick steps!

Quick steps!

One could not count

the steps on courting

being somewhat of

a hurried affair.

Reviews

[θεά]

This is written in ponder and rumination, isn't it? I like how you are always looking to pack a punch in the finale of your short poems, making it unpredictable even if the first line itself starts off as a philosophical one. Nice thought Andrew. I like how you've commented on the rashness of flings and hurried affairs.

Keep writing.
Best,
M.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much Malika for your lovely words. yes I like to mix it up a bit to keep the reader glued in on a thought shared. :)

[unfathomd]

Trust me, I seriously had no idea what it meant at first. When I take individual words, this poem gives a totally different meaning but contextually, damn! that was deep ;).16 words can keep one thinking for a day :)