Just another case of whodunnit?

Just another case of whodunnit?

A Story by andrew mitchell

Just another case of whodunnit?
The ramblings of a rambling man
found alongside a body, dead
 lies in the gutter.
The Police had many leads.
The women town folk said.
" There was no more room 
  here, for idle chit chat."
The newspaper headlines read.
Man murdered impersonating a woman.
The investigation continues 
on suspects well informed; 
female gossip spreads.
When female chit chat travelled on wings
faster than the postman.

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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'Those poor officers... They could never hope to compete with the females' gossip mill.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

haha So true thanks clifford.
The clue was blown away by the wind...
just beyond the bend... Secrets of a true
identity are traced around the body...
Your poem is shrouded with mystery.
truly, Pat


Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

I thank you Pat for your lovely review.:)
Patricia Wedel

8 Years Ago

You are welcome... By the way... Where are the clues for
politics today... a complete myster.. read more
andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

yes they are indeed
That's the problem with gossips, rumors and small towns. It's the small minds that spread that kinda bullshiit..The poor guy, probably faked his own death...lol Got the hell outta dodge...He probably didn't get out quick enough, before word spread, that he was already dead. Complete with a police investigation and who knows what else, bored folks cook up. They can spin tales, that grow two heads and four legs...haha I like the story and I like mysteries. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Roma I am always chuffed when you grace my page. What an honour for me. :)
Oh, the gossips in a small town were far faster than any internet connection, that's for sure. The investigation would continue and continue....but the poor guy would still be dead. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you Lydia for dropping by.
well... Best we all stop wagging our tongues I guess.
Could land us dead. Poor fella. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

lol thank you Ana, a bit of tongue in cheek really. yes never compete with the ladies lol.
Papaya

8 Years Ago

Some women are good and kind.
Others will chew you to bits with their rose coloured lips.
read more
andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

indeed its a mixed bag really, but its funny how every town has that gossiper be it a man or woman, .. read more
Nothing murders good will faster than sharp tongues. Good one, Andrew.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

thank you pryde lol
Have to be suspicious when a females tongue starts wagging. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

yes indeed kathie
"The Police were suspicious." hmmmmmmmmmm reminds me of a case in NY (where i grew up) a body was found cut into parts and bagged and buried in a backyard ..along with the headline the story read "police are treating it as a possible homicide" ...you just have to shake your head and walk away eh!? gossip and chit chat on wings ..faster than the speeding bullet ..able to leap tall buildings ..then tear them down as well :} interesting reading for me this morning sir.. i can see the crime scene so clearly ..so well done says i!
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

it was really a humorous theme on how women can talk chit chat for ages on anything while men remain.. read more
andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

i will change that line the police were.... its a bit weak . thanks e for reviewing

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Added on August 26, 2016
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