When a mirror never lies.

When a mirror never lies.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

When a mirror never lies.
She had an hourglass
figure once until
time slipped through 
her fingers.
Broken.

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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Excellent, concise piece Andrew, both so true and real...time waits for nothing or no-one and this shows how time breaks us all, in one form or another, if we let it...loved this :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you for gracing my page poppy and for your lovely words.
This one got me laughing out loud. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you Kathie
Nice ... great senryu ... I will say. There is tremendous craft and inspiration in this short work:):):)

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

thank you so much pryde

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Added on August 22, 2016
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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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