Straight ahead?

Straight ahead?

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Straight ahead?
When the sign read.
Life is straight forward.
I knew this wasn't about directions.
My life was going
round and round
in circles.

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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mou
if the sign is read with dot at every line,then life seems to be gone in forward but later get to realize that it is within a loop itself.
Great humor and amazing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much Mou
Patterns repeat until we break our stride and change direction ... it can be painful at first:):):)

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

How true Pryde Thank you.
great sense of humor sir! gotta laugh for crying .. i have never seen a road sign that reads "Danger ..Straight Road Ahead" .. maybe we need them ..easy to let ones guard down when the road is straight :}
E.
https://youtu.be/kK62tfoCmuQ

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the big smile E. LOL.:)
The phrase "Always go foward,never go straight " comes to mind.
As always excellent work my friend !

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you Bill for your kind words.
Clever! Short and sweet, but I really did like it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you fellow poet for your comments.:)

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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