A game to be won.

A game to be won.

In upgrading her attack;

glamour, grooming,

she was in fact

lowering her defences.

In a game of love

to be won or lost.

She wasn't losing.

Whether full forward

or full back.

She owned centre.

Reviews

[Haseo]

the first section of the poem was great , it described her technique and how she is going to play the game
the 2nd section contained three lines, the first is okay but the other two lines didn't match

its a game to be won but the in these two lines "to be won or lost. She wasn't losing."

it didn't sound right to me

I am rating 90

[andrew mitchell]

thank you for your comments i was trying to imply a woman never loses