Open inspection.

Something different. looking for love they find a tragic heart that could speak!

Open inspection.

Who shall knock

on these heart walls 

bleeding?

Can't they see.

The sign reads "Closed!"

Betrayed, beaten, weathered;

Not for sale!

But they continue to try

to break the beast,

their quest to conquer,

to enslave,

only to dispose of...

at their will.

Fear not this heart

which shall not engulf you

just shiver in your hold,

having been spat out before.

"Oh please, if you must, get in."

"Have a look around, see the love,

what's left."

"Take your time"

"No! Be quick!"

Open inspection.

Reviews

[Epicness]

Hi Andrew, really good poem :) I enjoy your writing style and I especially like the line "betrayed, beaten, weathered; not for sale!" It really pulls you in.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Epicness for your words and dropping by.:)

[Epicness]

You're welcome :)