The circuit breaker.

The circuit breaker.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

The circuit breaker.
With the circuit dead,
unable to find
the breakage,
unrepairable;
a new circuit
recommended, connected
restored the lights.

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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i would leave the last line out ..your metaphor is strong and needs no explanation in my eyes ;) sometimes the recommended new connection really works out ..even some on line excursions end in happiness (tho i would guess not often) love your short and packed full style sir ..works real good says i!
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

thank you einstein for your kind words and visit

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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