You floating by...

You floating by...

If it was not for

the luminescence attraction;

you calling, luring.

I would not have got

entangled, wrapped

in your tentacles, love: 

stinging my heart,

as you floated by.

Reviews

[Valentine]

Funny how that special one can get to you. Valentine

[Einstein Noodle]

ohhhh beware the Portuguese Woman of War!!! how delicate they suspend themselves gently swaying to the rhythm ... so mesmerizing ... but do not touch boy ..no no no! :)
E.

[andrew mitchell]

yes indeed thank you sir

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh those jellyfish are so dangerous...and some lovers are just as deadly...

j.

[andrew mitchell]

haha yes indeed thank you j

[RomaJ]

Love can have that effect on people. Especially, if it's an attractive person....:)
Charming write Andrew. It's sweet and so meaningful.

[andrew mitchell]

haha No I think I just had a charming reader! thank you Roma for your kind review.:)