I didn't feel a thing! Honestly!

I didn't feel a thing! Honestly!

How Life would be

so much easier

if we didn't feel pain.

No more broken hearts

just the happy notion:

"Plenty more fish in the sea."

How Life would be

so much more positive;

goodbye to the fear of death

as fear itself feeds on pain.

That feeling of falling ten stories high

knowing fear and pain are gone.

People asked. "I wonder if he suffered?"

I replied. " Didn't hurt a bit,  I felt nothing before I died!"

To go to war and lose a limb

only to be asked how are you.

" Never felt better didn't feel a thing!"

" No pain!" "Truly!"

Yes! The Human prototype had its failings;

maybe turning the dial of pain receptors off

and increasing the love dial would have been

so much better.

Life would have had

a more positive outlook

for everyone.

Reviews

[Nisreen]

Without pain there might have been a highly slight chance of no mercy to exist on planet earth
Though nowadays we see that mercy is a definite obsolete emotion

a utopia of no pain
exists in a heaven
where the soul will rest
among purity

I enjoyed your thoughts here Andrew

[andrew mitchell]

as always i appreciate your visit and comments. thank you curiosity, fellow poet. For me knowing I would have no pain in dying or maybe a loss in love, a broken heart, each would be most welcome to just shrug it off as a no pain gain and move on!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and yet, if we didn't feel any pain...how would we know the difference when we could feel really good?

nice concept in this...well done.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you j, i don't think it would matter j knowing the difference, the positivity, and no pain would just shrug this off lol.