Tidal changes

Tidal changes.

Washed up amongst

the sands of time

beached;

bitterness of no return. 

Rejected.

as waves of love

retreat.

Tidal love.

Reviews

[Norah]

I enjoyed reading this wonderful short poem because of the metaphor ..great write

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much Norah:)

[H]

I like this poem, short poems that express a lott are nice. I like the set-up amd the way the metaphor is slowly added and the way in which it is described through the imagery, good job.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your kind words H.:)