Damn you!

Damn you!

Do not dare

to cross me,

the diameter of you

I would circumference;

damning you

within the 

candled circle.

Reviews

[Ruth]

Aside from the intensity of each line cleverly woven Andrew, the final "candled circle" is awesome. Really puts that conviction across, superb...

[Akshita]

Smart mathematical poem! I really liked it. : )

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Akshita

[V]

Smartly written piece. Somehow your last stanza reads close to my writing style, I think, which makes it even more relatable and likable.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Vanessa, glad you liked it, this was based on two movies " the devil rides out" and " to the devil a daughter". starring Christopher Lee and based on the books by Dennis Wheatley. Occult mystery movies.lol

[V]

I think I have heard of the movie titles before.. Thanks for the explanation. I did, you're welcome.

[Cassie]

Hahaha..this is really good Andy, use of maths here. I was poor in maths while in high school and funny enough in university i was scoring all As in statistics.. Enjoyed reading

[andrew mitchell]

thank you cassie for dropping in and leaving me the smile.