Discarded cleverly on deceit.

Discarded cleverly on deceit.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Discarded cleverly on deceit.
When I was given
her phone number 
on a piece of  folded paper,
with the promise
of not opening
'til I get home;
My initial thoughts were:
YES! YES!  YES!
However, on the back of message
 unfolded, opened
she wrote. "Wrong Number!"

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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ah, yes, the big tease....why not just say "no" to begin with...getting the hopes up on the A side, then dashing them on the B side.

wicked woman.

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Wicked indeed lol Thank you Jacob:)
hhahaha....thats very clever.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Don't get any ideas now lol. You're married:) Thanks Cassie.
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V
That's a harsh and mean way of expressing that one is not interested. A heartbreak upon a piece of paper or at least a crumbling positive emotion. Anticipation turned into mere disappointment.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

It's a harsh world out there Vanessa lol .Thank you for the visit>:)
V

8 Years Ago

It is. You're welcome.

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