Not your typical water feature!

Not your typical water feature!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Not your typical water feature.
As the waters rose
so did the bidet
cleansing unwanted
      thoughts;
a wet experience for some.
I'm just glad we live in a world
that's not entirely paperless!

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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not entirely paperless...and not entirely technological...there are still real tears to be shed...

something palpable...not in cyberspace somewhere....or just virtual.

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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V
Sort of vague message behind your words. Def a witty read by you again, interesting images and word use (bidet - I don't come across that word so often...^^) Your last two lines read a little disjointed, that's why it stirs a sentiment/a notion of opacity.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

simplistic really in meaning, give me paper over a bidet anyday. Just my warped sense of humour Vane.. read more
V

8 Years Ago

I thought so. ^^

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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