It's Nothing!

It's Nothing!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

It's Nothing!
I'm stranded on something!
How much nothing,
does nothing have 
in volume, mass?
The saying: It's all or nothing!"
When someone asks:
" What's on your mind?"
I reply: "Nothing!" 
Full or empty,
leaving me stranded on something
maybe it is.....
                     nothing!

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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you've got me thinking now. Ouch.
:)
Don't ask me what I'm think though. Ok?

Posted 8 Years Ago


Papaya

8 Years Ago

I was thinking I should add an 'ing' after think.
I love the style of this poem and the way the word "nothing" (the main focus of this poem) never seems to sound/become overused because of the way this poem is structured and the conversational tone is varied.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you Monica for your visit and kind words

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andrew mitchell

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