The wheels of knowledge in motion

The wheels of knowledge in motion.

As the wheels of knowledge

and education took me

on a drive

turning, I found

my empty mind

became an open mind.

Reviews

[S.M. Melling]

Ive never read a poem with a structure like this before, but it's very poignant and soulful. I like it a lot!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much dear poet, S.M.Melling. When it comes to structure I don't follow the rules when I should lol

[Papaya]

Love this. And the more we learn the more we realize there's so much more to know!

[andrew mitchell]

its a life long drive ever changing, growing. Thank you Papaya for your words.

[Papaya]

So true. You're welcome Andrew.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

damn, andrew...that is my creed as a teacher...creating open minds, hopefully smarter, and better writers, but most importantly...open minds.

j.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jacob I often wonder if choices create a more open mind .

[Not here]

Knowledge certainly does open your mind. I love the short poems you write, as they still hold some much in their depths. Fantastic job on this one.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Dante for your kind words I shall return the favours soon

[Not here]

No problem. You've done a lot already, I'm just trying to catch up.