In the clearing

In the clearing.

As the walls of love

came crashing down

around him,

setting the heart free

he saw loneliness

in the clearing.

Reviews

[Elmarie]

It is a precious treasure when you are with someone you can really live with. Yes even the strange bits. But as I have learnt we are our only best friend.

Blessings El

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you El I shall visit you soon.

[V]

I like the tone about it and the message it conveys yet somehow I don't feel content with the clouded line, it reads disjointed to me, somehow, not really fitting...

[andrew mitchell]

Actually vanessa i did not have clouded in the original take I slipped it in to accentuate "in the clearing" lol I'll remove it thanks for dropping by and good morning to you!

[V]

It is not even morning where I currently reside but a good morning to you. Sometimes the changes we make on our writings after the first draft make it a tad unclearer to get...