There was no comma!

There was no comma!

When the exclamation mark

was halted, changed

becoming a question,

       questioning

        a full stop

    had to intervene.

No further comment!

Reviews

[Earl Schumacker]

Hi Andrew, Interesting. Nice write. When the exclamation mark transformed or twisted into a question mark, did it simply stop or did it retain some of the elements of its original self or state of being? Maybe one less exclamation mark in the world won't be noticed. Oops! I just read the last line, "No further comment!" I will comment no further on this subject.

New subject: Thank you Andrew for commenting on my Sex Instructions poem. I don't know how accurate it is. I wrote it on the fly by the seat of my pants. It is hard to write when jumping from wing to wing way up high. Have a great day. Earl

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i can't believe and wow, how or why did that happen...pause to think...

'nuff said.

[andrew mitchell]

hahahaha just my humour for today, thanks for the chuckle jacob

[Cassie]

ahaahhaa...this is very brilliant

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Cassie for your lovely comment.:):):)