Completed, but the puzzle was not!

Completed, but the puzzle was not.

When the final piece

a jigsaw of love

was placed.

It was still

the wrong love.

A love all the same,

but a love not

 connected.

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

A but what happens when there is connection but too many sparks ... love the metaphor work, Andrew:)

[andrew mitchell]

thank you pryde and i think fireworks if too many sparks

[Einstein Noodle]

mind stimulating love write ..such a conundrum as we do all the right things in and of ourselves to "make it happen" ..yet still it does not ..oh the frustration and disappointment ... perhaps it might work better if we wore a Chinese Finger Trap and sought to "get the one of attraction to slip into it ;) i really like this one sir ..makes one think and feel
E.

[andrew mitchell]

lol fingertrap. thank you e for your words