A heart of stone.

A heart of stone.

It had to be somewhere

maybe just a hairline

to break her heart of stone.

Chip

chip

chipping away

no cracks

to be found,

they said she was

solid.......

as a rock.

 

Reviews

[mou]

yes,I get your tone of writing a bit ..
sometime we consider those things as the hardest one but may it makes its look like a stone , as the past plays a role of the toughest and unforgettable teacher...
I love the way you portrait it and Frankly speaking I get to its vibration completely after reading it twice..
wonderful!

[andrew mitchell]

thank you mou for your lovely words

[mou]

you're welcome friend

[jacob erin-cilberto]

okay Mick....."you'll never break, never break , never break, this heart of stone"

and yet, chipping away a little at a time...might be the way.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks jacob, just a silly write!