Her flood

Her flood

As the barrage of emotions

confused, rose

breaking my levee banks

of rationality

logic bewildered

drowned

in her flow

somewhere

love

could not be found

missing.

Reviews

[Nisreen]

Maybe love can't be contained in words
Maybe it breaks all boundaries

I like this one

The flood once it breaks who can dam it up

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Nisreen for your words.I did not know you have left Canada. Is that sad or good?

[Nisreen]

I despise the fact that i left
but you gotta do what you gotta do ..... i miss utopia on earth ......
i heard Australia is just as awesome .....

[andrew mitchell]

haha Life is what you make it but if you are born in Aussie you have a chance to succeed :)

[Nisreen]

I know .... every place has something beautiful .....

[Pryde Foltz]

We are creatures of emotion and that is a our strength ... that we do not understand emotion's value and have invested in the fable that is rationality ... that is our masquerade ... the clothing of an infinite rainbow in white so we might not get lost in the nuance. Embrace the nuance and find true passion and intimacy. The knowing of self. ... where did that come from ... lol. A poem to follow ... you heard it first:) An inspiring write:)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your lovely review Pryde