Bottled Love!

Bottled love!

 If Love was

   bottled

  the label 

should read:

  Beware.

  Proceed with caution.

  Opening could cause

insurmountable  injury

    to the heart.

With no volume to go by:

        too little

        too late

        too much

      the overdose

         drowning.

      Love eternal

           awaits

       but careful

   what you wish for;

   irreversible effects

         internally.

            Oh!

            And

    if pain still persists

      see your doctor.

Reviews

[V]

So true. An interestingly written ouch piece on love. Love is a poison offered in a bottle, socially accepted but destructive..

[andrew mitchell]

i like your take, thank you vanessa lol

[V]

You're welcome. ;)

[ms. barrie]

oy, your pen perfectly captured the very essence of being in love...or rather unrequited love.
i think this is my favorite of yours...very engaging and brilliant choice of words. -- thank you for sharing, andrew...X

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Black Cat for purring on my page:):) x

[ms. barrie]

you're welcome...lol cheeky monkey

[Nisreen]

Lol that's funny
Yet we all go straight to that bottle .....

[andrew mitchell]

drunk, overdosed on love lol.

[Gee]

Like this, if only you could perfect and bottle true love you'd make a small fortune.Got to say you must have the most prolific on here, I struggle to put together 1 every 2 weeks....your penis mighty !!!!! OOPS

[andrew mitchell]

I'm a churner Gee! and don't tell everyone my penis is mighty.... Oh you meant my pen is!!! lol:):)

[andrew mitchell]

I might churn out writes but doesn't mean I'm popular lol Its like fishing I may not get a bite, a review! But it's all fun!

[Gee]

And when all's said and done that's all that matters. By the way you're both popular and appreciated this end of the keyboard.

[andrew mitchell]

thanks man!!