Voting was in!

Voting was in!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Voting was in!
my pencilled thoughts
drawn on paper,
a caricature,
     hers
extremely exaggerated
but it was election time:
     figure 8
   full breasts
   small waist
   curvy hips.
She got my vote
    everytime
   her pledge,
    a promise
     I fulfilled.

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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You and your wit. Lol. Refreshing and fun to read write. Though I think your last lines almost sound as if there was something more to it, there's a certain heaviness in them unlike the lines before...

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you Vanessa , I wasn't quite sure how to finish this write, so it is as you say, just blending.. read more
V

8 Years Ago

You did it well. You're welcome.
andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

thank you......

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