Structure secured, not!

A fictional display, just rambling on...

Structure secured, not!

There was no structure

         anymore

     when she said.

"I don't love you anymore."

 

    As walls of devotion

   came tumbling down

        anger erupted

          Mt Vesuvius.

              Home.

    The ash descending on

    a love pronounced dead,

             preserved 

        drowned one's mind

            in horror,

               dread,

             disbelief

            at this time

             showered

           with emotions.

       The heart of desire 

                crushed

           in the carnage

              lay buried....

                  dead

       as one love moved on.

Reviews

[JBoone]

WOW!!!! This is so good. So much pain and lost but so beautifully conveyed.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much JBoone for your kind words.:)

[JBoone]

You are welcome sir.