When sincere linked up with in!

When sincere linked up with in!

On removing her

      charade

I found her love

    not there,

  empty, ghostly.

         Gone,

leaving without a trace

  except her closet....

       I found,

           full.

       Skeletons.

Reviews

[zunie frost]

I found her love
not there,
empty, ghostly.
these are the most beautiful lines
i love it as always

[Cassie]

Even me I would think that those are skeletons, love gone but clothes full on the closet..lol

[andrew mitchell]

hahaha Thank you cassis for your review :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Those skeletons. I have many. I liked this poem. Told a honest and true tale for the most of us. Thank you Andrew for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much John for your kind words

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Ruth]

I adore the form to this...lovely structure...peeling back the layers is never to be taken lightly, I guess...takes courage :)

[andrew mitchell]

thank you so much poppy for reading

[Centipedle]

Sometimes peeling back the layers is the hardest thing to do. Love it pen on.

[andrew mitchell]

Yes the onion theory thank you Centipedie.

[Nisreen]

You touch upon so many things in such few lines
Well it seems like the skeletons could be way more scary than one can imagine

You always get a small giggle out of me reading your work

[andrew mitchell]

thank you so much lol for your smile

[KWP]

was she ever there do you think?

I like it - love the format too - adds emphasis X

[andrew mitchell]

thank you for tyour kind words and gracing my page Elizabeth

[KWP]

welcome :)