Through colours I saw...

Through colours I saw...

When she wore black,

I was absorbed

in her shadows,

deep, exploring.

Wearing red

I was excited

hoping for more...

Choosing white

being light

we shared..

in  the humour.

When she chose blue

        I was left

         drifting

        alone.......

      in her silence.

Through colours I saw.....

Reviews

[Centipedle]

Sounds like a deep interest into the clothes she's wearing. Really liked it ^^ Pen on!

[andrew mitchell]

I like this take because I wrote this about her moods and didn't see this one. thanks!!

[iamshadowine]

quite nice and impressive! enjoyed it! keep writing :D

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you dear poet!