In the love arena

In the love arena.

The rules of engagement were simple.

Take control.

Conquer.

She surrendering,

you in turn became

her prisoner....

in love.

The ruler always rules

her kingdom.

However, I was given

visitation rights.

Reviews

[Cassie]

hahaha...like the last stanza..visitation rights!!! lol

[andrew mitchell]

hahaha thank you cassie

[Elmarie]

Love it. I think this Arena of love has many different scenes. Although the poem might seem light, it has a lot of depth to it and portrays the inner conflicts felt; profoundly well. There are lines between the lines in this poem that read so clearly. LOL Thanks Andrew :)

Blessing

El

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much Elmarie. yes the pursuit of love is never really that simple! lol:)

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hahahaha...how did you get so wise :P

[andrew mitchell]

I fell in love so many times lynn being a romantic. I was thrown off the horse many a time but having said that I had to climb back on the horse so to speak and try and hang on a bit longer each time.lol Thank you lynn. you always throw a smile my way which makes my day.;)

[KWP]

hahahaha ... visitation rights can be ok ... is that called a conjugal visit? take it baby take it ...