Self doubt.

Self doubt.

There was an air

of hesitancy

from you,

the sun hiding

behind the clouds

when I said

" I love you."

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

It is rare that both hearts are in sync at the same time. And sometimes, it is easier to not say it than say it, or sometimes it is necessary to say it, despite the risk. It depends on a lot of things. Very nicely expressed in a small verse.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much for your review KLGoode

[V]

A small but hurting one. I dare to say in every (form of) relationship there's always one who loves more than the other. I can relate to your words though I was the faltering one, once. Yet how awful it must be for the other part to sense this hesitancy when already the entire heart is spilled and exposed.

[andrew mitchell]

Yes vanessa there is that imbalance as you say and I've been on both sides of the fence. Just topics they never taught or prepared us for at school lol

[V]

Yeah you're right. The life lessons which need to be learned by experiencing, no one tells you or teaches you before.

[andrew mitchell]

yes i know, a few clues would have been helpful at school, subjects like dating and managing your finances would have been more useful than doing logarithms.

[V]

Haha, maybe yes. ;)

[M.Babu]

Oh man - i hope the hesitancy worked in their favor!
Such economical use of words, although the end result packs a punch.
~M.Babu~

[andrew mitchell]

haha thank you so much for your review M.Babu