No control.

No control.

When control became

out of control,

stepping aside, pushed.

Chaos in laughter

stood up and

took over,

losing control.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we need a bit more of this...losing control....when we control our feelings and actions too much...we confine ourselves to an awfully dull life, albeit safe....but is safe such a good thing, always?

good questions raised by this...

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your words Jacob. I based this poem on Get Smart and applied it to everyday life lol