We got our love wires crossed

We got our love wires crossed.

When I crossed over

touching her red wire

suddenly, I ........

wasn't neutral anymore.

Eventually, I did settle...

back to earth

when she.....

moved on

taking her shocks

with her.

She was a live one,

leaving me feeling blue.

In the end, we weren't

truly connected.

Reviews

[B. Boileau]

All the static confusion sparked the illusion ! Ohms law may have helped, but I doubt it. Next time remove her shorts and see where it leads...

[andrew mitchell]

hahaha Bill are you mocking my masterpiece of literature lol Yes I'll remove her shorts, follow her leads and end up burnt,charred hanging from a light globe. Thank you Bill for dropping by my friend, always enjoy your reviews :)

[highonwords]

i totally enjoyed reading this poem - it's smart and simple - but the message got across - an affair that short-circuited, there was a spark, yes, but it died with the relationship

steph

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you steph for your kind review

[highonwords]

you're welcome, my friend :)

steph

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so it was a "short" lived affair...

and it burned....

[andrew mitchell]

In " Short" yes lol Thanks Jacob

[isus]

hey andrew, aldo i don't prefere 'romance' in poetry this one i like, it's unusual and more and more i like your stile of writing. keep up the good job :)

[andrew mitchell]

thank you isus

[charlie]

The electricity is in the air with this one, andrew Mitchell :)

[andrew mitchell]

haha yes indeed Charlie thanks for dropping by.