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 The world is orphaned!

The world is orphaned!

A Poem by andrew mitchell
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With Isis escalating, their cells under the radar it's a world entering chaos slowly!

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The World is orphaned.
When God gave man intelligence
that was his first downfall.
When God left the stage
that was his second.
The New Age coming is chaos!

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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yes, He might have left in our hands way too soon...everyone forgot lines and places...the stage lights need to go out...

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your words jacob
Have faith my friend... a new age ment something entirely different when the 5th demension sang about it. Course they were stoned at the time, but still... If you concede to chaos eventually it happens, if you strive towards peace it too can happen.



Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you Bill I hope so!
Some would say dramatic, I would say understated. We now enter a battle with no boundaries, no targets to aim at and can strike at any time, in any way we can conceive and a few we can't. This is the new world order, the chaos of having no agenda, other than destroying those different from what they perceive to be true.
As a non believer of sorts, it still puzzles me that they fight in God's name. Isn't he the one person who knows for an absolute fact to know that as a complete lie. A God who kills is no God I want to know. I feel sorry for the victims and their families, but mostly, I feel bad for true muslims who have to live in the shadow of those who use it as a shield to hide their hatred behind.
I hope like everyone else that I leave this world in a better condition than I entered, but feel that I am deluding myself. Can't we all just chill the hell out, smoke a big fat one and listen to some Floyd instead?
Is it too late for me to run for president? :)
Well said Andrew.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Wow I totally agree Lorry and I think these problems are starting from hatred because on one hand we.. read more
Hi Andrew!
I completely agree with you. We take a look at all the bad things that are happening in this world as of right now, and it's just not going to turn out well for future generations! All these shootings and things going on, what are future generations going to think? 'Oh well my grandfather went and shot up a school, so I guess that's okay for me to do the same as well! And especially if Donald Trump gets elected as president. We're screwed if that'll ever happen! He makes people feel down, and bashes them every chance he gets.
Short poem but yet, you seem to really get the point across!
-Sierra

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Hi Sierra, thank you so much for your review and comments. I cannot see this problem going away, we .. read more

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