Welcome to the Thought Factory!

Welcome to the Thought Factory!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Welcome to the Thought Factory!
Will everyone just stop for a moment please.
I've called this meeting today.
Because demand has outstripped supply.
Management requires a 24/7 effort.
Settle down thoughts!
I know I know!
We'll take shifts.
Here's the deal!
Blue team! I want more deep sad tear jerking writes
to appease our female readers.
Red team! We need passion, lust, love in abundance, hot.
Turn up the heat! Make the reader's mind fry! Got it!
Orange team! Turn theology upside down. More dear God writes needed.
Black team! You know what I want darker than dark!  Pure Black I tell you!
Make the reader shiver in thought!
Humour and Satire team! Yes! Yes! lol haha! lmao!  lofr! Funny! Good one!
I don't have to tell you guys!
Green team! Envy, jealousy I want dark green! No vegetables!
Well! Snap to it Thought teams!
Stop daydreaming!
We're not called the Thought Factory for nothing!
We need writes now!
Besides, we don't want to be like next door,
in the Mad Factory. 
Thoughts all wrapped up, padded in white!
Do we!!!!!
They might have the winning score!

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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This was so hilarious mate! Loved it! Amazingly written, especially by dividing them into various colors and keeping the characteristics of each alive! :D

I wish everyone in the Thought Factory is successful in accomplishing their goals. :P XD

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

lol thank you Blackheart I shall return the love as they say:)
bravo for the extensively done metaphor here...the thoughts just must get themselves in line---

although i think most writes are a collage of colors and emotions...this factory could make them all...no white coats needed, just plain white paper to catch the thoughts made by poetic piece-workers.

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you jacob lol where would we be without thoughts! lol

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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