Travelling through you.

Travelling through you.

His thoughts gather

around her epicentre.

No need to reply he says.

I'm just a past travelling through you.

Reviews

[wordman]

sounds like some serious memories!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much wordman

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Transient love...what's it all about Elfie?

[andrew mitchell]

lol thank you lynn

[softlyfall]

I do love this poem...it takes the consensus reality of time and space and subjects it to that curious quantum scrutiny that crumples them all up.
"I have a whole trash bin full of crumpled realities", she says, blowing the dust of time from her diary.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you softlyfall for your kind words:):)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, i take this a certain way...reminds me of the idea of that person who never stays, always moves on...no permanent relationship.....love me today, because tomorrow i will be but a memory.

[andrew mitchell]

How right you are Jacob! Thank you for your words

[alifeacoustic]

Those reflective past you's conjure up some intricate images. The end of love is never smooth and rocks you from happiness to confusion in a beat. Those beats reverberate long after they are struck. Best to keep on travelling through, if you can :)

[andrew mitchell]

Yes I agree lorry the only way is forward!

[Coyote Poetry]

Reflection can't repair the past and if we are lucky. We learn from the reflection. I like the places and the ending my friend. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much John and I take my hat off to you for serving for your country as well as your excellent poetry

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Andrew and thank you for kind words.