On the wind

On the wind.

Sometimes....

seeds of thoughts

travel precariously

with the wind 

landing without reason.

Reviews

[Mary Helda]

Sometimes......
seeds of thought
travel unwaveringly
with the wind
landing with reason
.........you are right but i also think sometimes our thoughts travel knowingly for a certain purpose..there is just a way they come and fall in the right place,at the right time and you find your mind occupied....great poem. it got me thinking

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Mary and your thinking is right, sometimes they land with reason! :)

[Mary Helda]

yes they do:-)

[KWP]

ahhh so true - the universes way of speaking with us directly I believe - we gotta make a conscious effort to catch those thoughts and give em a worthy ponder ...

this is different to your norm

with the title I was expecting a wee giggle 'THWWWPPPPPP" xxx

[andrew mitchell]

Hahaha No KWP this title was not about the effects of baked beans! lol Thank you my Sydneysider friend:) x

[ANTO]

Some thoughts have a life of their own it would seem

the seeds of thoughts - I wonder where they begin their spark of life.
nice pondering with you my friend.

Happy 2016 Andrew. I hope its good to you.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you anto, you have a happy new year too my northern friend. could be an interesting year

[ANTO]

The Chinese used to say 'May you live in interestng times' as a kind of curse. 'Interesting' being like 'troubled' I think.. We certainly are that...

I hope I havent offended any of our Chinese members/friends.

[alifeacoustic]

They do indeed. This thought itself blew quite a ways on the wind. I wonder what those seed will grow into and scatter into the wind with now. Wouldn't it be good to follow the seeds we created and see their path?
Superbly stated, as ever.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Lorry for your kind words

[Einstein Noodle]

"The wind blows wherever it pleases. You hear its sound, but you cannot tell where it comes from or where it is going. So it is with everyone born of the Spirit." John 3:8

i love the wind! and the serendipity inferred in your poem ... for those in need of answers and reasons a bit of frustration ..but those wild adventurers launch boats and set sail with great excitment .. like your minimal poem a lot this morning .. excites the mind and spirit :)
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you E for your smile :)