Climate changing, ocean rises!

Sorrows weep,

tissues wet,

drenched

in drowning;

tears collected

an ocean

formed

as sadness

swells

a whirlpool

storms.

Reviews

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The earth is expanding. It does this naturally perhaps it's way of purging the illness growing on it lol Of course man is accelerating her purge with fracking ect But the earth does do this routinely. It's new to us because we haven't lived threw it before

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p.s. we don't have to die lol we just have to change our ways. Stop fracking and dumping chemicals into the waters and use clean non nuclear energy

[wordman]

i always have believed it was natural,we have cycles in all nature,as we do our selves
great write andrew,great comment lynn

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They know the changes are coming and they try to prolong from coming and they are getting prepared for its coming

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Wordman and lynn, I think man is changing how Mother Earth thinks now, a bit like Karma catching up with us, a bit like how our bodies are temples but abuse them you pay in the end with your life! A one chance scenario! Anyway Its only a poem don't panic yet!!! :(

[wordman]

and i am packed and moving to high ground ! it will shock me if we`re still here in 10 to 15 yearsread moreand i am packed and moving to high ground ! it will shock me if we`re still here in 10 to 15 years
we are in the last days,don`t worry about a tide,worry about your hyde

[andrew mitchell]

thanks Wordman, our biggest danger is bushfires as we live in the hills.

[wordman]

that`s better than living on the bush!

[andrew mitchell]

lol...............

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. The words create lonely and dangerous places. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry. The storms of life leave us wishing for better endings.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Its scary cos even if we all get along in this world Earth cannot sustain our growth! Thank you John

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. How can you stop it? Man greed for everything. Little concern for the beauty of the earth.

[andrew mitchell]

Everybody wants a family hence China, India, Indonesia are having a big impact on Earth out of no disrespect but just living life but..... trouble lies ahead

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. I live in Michigan. Most of the Great Lakes are polluted. Lake Saint Clair. So polluted. Can't swim in her.

[andrew mitchell]

wow scary!!! I mean where is our World's sewage going everyday! I hate to think!

[Coyote Poetry]

Into our water in most places. California folks don't know. They drink the water recycled. No water source except the ocean. To make ocean water drinkable. Very costly. Was one of my jobs in the Army.

[andrew mitchell]

can you imagine the carnage if terrorists sabotaged our water supplies!

[Coyote Poetry]

The bleach killed most bad things in the water. I made water in Asia, Africa and South America. Need to add protection against germs. Water sources for drinking. Should be protected.

[alifeacoustic]

And we havent even staryed with the storm yet. The way we are going we better hope our future generations adapt and evolve flippers and gills. We made the mess but who will clean it up.
Sharp, quick and to the point. Great write.

[andrew mitchell]

I know its scary! If we don't have a war to kill some of us off , the way we treat the planet and the demand is out stripping our resources, its a volatile mix for Us!