Honest and true logic in the poem my friend.
" Hello!"
" Can I have Earth's spare parts department, please!"
" We're all in need of replacements!"
" Can I put an order in? "
" We're in need of more fresh air, clean water, trees, food fresh!"
" You know those kinda things!"
" Hello! Anyone there!"
" Is this Amazon?"
I liked the above lines a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Left something for the reader to think about.
Coyote
You know Canada is known to have the highest amount of garbage disposed per household in the whole world
People throw out furniture here
That makes me think
I have been in countries where people pass down furniture through generations
Greed for life is not destructive. our greed for unnecessary things, on the other hand is. like, wa.. read moreGreed for life is not destructive. our greed for unnecessary things, on the other hand is. like, wanting money... how many things go down, under the shroud of that shining illusion of worth?
Wanting to live, a sustainable life. no destroying the environment, however, is the greed, that should replace our current ones.
8 Years Ago
From greed comes power and then its mismanaged. Thanks Danny A can of worms we opened lol
I like this one :) I swear that many people in this world believe we can just simply replenish everything we need just use and abuse until we will have no more :) I need water in my state! haha
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
haha so do I We had a bushfire recently in our state stretching 225 kms long in its perimeter and up.. read morehaha so do I We had a bushfire recently in our state stretching 225 kms long in its perimeter and up to 20 metres high. I'm scared every summer we are in the zone!
A very nice modern media driven piece. Great idea for your work and well done.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you Willard, when you visit it feels like christmas lol as I appreciate your kind words when y.. read moreThank you Willard, when you visit it feels like christmas lol as I appreciate your kind words when you visit and I shall return the love!:):) Thanks again friend!
8 Years Ago
Now I have to read more of your work since you need a bigger present for your quality work. ;)
Too kind Willard, you may be disappointed lol I churn out a lot of dribble, you may have to dig deep.. read moreToo kind Willard, you may be disappointed lol I churn out a lot of dribble, you may have to dig deep haha
8 Years Ago
We all have a bit of fluff and unrefined work flowing in space. I write rather like I take picture. .. read moreWe all have a bit of fluff and unrefined work flowing in space. I write rather like I take picture. I take lots and hope one is worthwhile.
"Parts department" now that's witty, this would be very funny if it weren't so true it makes one want to cry. Oh heck I am going to laugh anyway and beg forgiveness if anyone find me politicly incorrect :~)
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
You had me laughing Bear. Thank you for your kind words. It was all satire this write!
8 Years Ago
See that is something that surprises me, I like to make people laugh or smile at least and the Chris.. read moreSee that is something that surprises me, I like to make people laugh or smile at least and the Christmas poems I posted doesn't seem to be doing the trick, so I hope your poem works where mine have not :~)
Strindberg said.
" When I come home and sit at my writing table, then I live.... I live, and I live in manifold fashion of all human beings. I depict; I am glad with the glad, wicked with the wicked,.. more..